Sunday, November 9, 2008

Daniel the Funny

This is the story for my first film.  It is called Daniel the Funny.  Enjoy!

Chapter 1 and 2

Daniel was driving on the path.  Then he crashed into a building.  He went into his house and then a robber broke into his house.  He had a gun.  He wanted all his money.  I WANT ALL YOUR MONEY.

He got into his other car, but there were road works and Daniel forgot to pay his TAX. Garda cars went after him.   Then he crashed into a wall.  He ran away and got away.  The police did not know what to do so they went back to the police station.

Chapter 3 and 4

When the police got back to the police station they told their boss and he got very cross.  YOU COULD HAVE TRIED HARDER, said the boss.  Daniel went back to his house and watched some TV until the news came on.  This is breaking news.  A man has been going crazy around town and the police know where he is.  That’s all for now.  I’ve got to hide,’ said Daniel.  AAARRRRR!!! Said the police. He got into his broken car but he had left the cooker on and his house went on FIRE!!!  Na na na na na.  You can’t get me,’ said Daniel. Garda cars came but the police just got the robber and the robber was arrested.

Chapter 5 and 6

That time when they got back the boss wasn’t that cross.  Just one more to go, said the boss.  Daniel stole a caravan.  It started to rain.  Daniel stood there and nengver came back.  Then the police found him.  AGGGHHHH!!!!!! Said Daniel.  Daniel stole a motor bike.  All the Garda cars and motorbikes went after him.  Through the streets and through the towns.  Through the countryside and even through THE SEA!!! And, through the very hot desert, and also through the snow and they all ended up in Antartica.  The got him and they brought him back to America.

Chapter 7 and 8

When Daniel was in jail he did not know what to do.  Then he had an idea.  He broke the camera and escaped.  VICTORY IS MINE!!!! said Daniel. He ran away as fast as he could but then he slipped on a banana peel . OW!!! said Daniel and he was bleeding.  Garda cars went after him.  He climbed to the top of the twin towers but he had left one of his shoes behind.  SHOE SHOE!!! said Daniel and he stole a Garda car and he fell asleep in the car.  He crashed into every car in the town.  He even crashed into every building.  And he had fallen asleep for two whole days and nights.

Chapter 9 and 10

Then Daniel woke up and brought a tent to stay dry because it was raining.  It was midnight and he stole a jeep and went through the seven seas to IRELAND!  For a holiday in Connemara.  He stayed in a holiday house called The Point.  He saw hares and sheep and he also saw an invisible beach and he was very happy but the police still knew where he was.  The next morning they had an idea.  They went through the sea like Daniel and they FOUND HIM!!!!! and brought him back to their boss and arrested him.

Chapter 11 and 12

That time when Daniel was in jail he woke up and found out that he was in jail. WHAT!!!!!!! said Daniel.  He was confused.  How did this happen, he said, and he broke the other camera and he was FREE!!!!!!!!!!  Daniel went away to Australia and camped in the desert but the police still knew where he was.  But Daniel was enjoying a nice holiday.   But when they told their boss that the had escaped he was FURIOUS.  ARRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!! said the boss.  But the police were in New York but they just did not know what to do so they went back to Ireland.

Friday, July 18, 2008

My First Post

Hi,

my name is Charlie Kelly and this is my first post. I am seven years old. This could be a record because I am only young and you have to be a grown up to make a company.